Below is a little clue...Enjoy...
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It was known since the beginning of time that there were many planets and galaxies that have made our universe their home. Some inhabited man, others only dust and gas. And then there were some that inhabited nothing but the mere fantasy of mythical creatures. And of all the planets and galaxies out there, there was but one realm so small and insignificant, that no human has ever been able to find or confirm its existence…
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Happy Reading
MAB
Fantasy Corner Books editor
A planet does not host life unless that life is visiting, i.e. Man visiting the Moon, the Moon is hosting the Man.
ReplyDeleteIf this is the start of your book, it's not a very good start if you're not keeping up with your terminology.
Dear Anonymous; Dated 31 May 2010
ReplyDeleteI would like to thank you for your critisism and I have changed hosted to inhabited...I would also like to suggest to you that since the book is about a fantasy world that doesn't realy exist in reality, that you first, wait to read the book before you make judgments about something you know nothing about...It's not finished, and will go thourgh a complete, termenoligy check, before being published on my blog.
Kind Regards and Happy Reading
MAB
Editor of Fantasy Corner Books
you did not need to change anything, who ever you are why dont you just f@#$%$%%%$ and learn how to appriciate someone els's work you dumb idiot ill somer fist you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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